Care country the British Council of care civilian, face all sorts of problems of this world, cambridge did not ask 14 lis enough, asked again to the examination room May 11.
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Elegant on May 11 think of exercise problems of your work languageMost Of The World ' S Problems Are Caused By Overpopulation.
To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree?
Writing model essay and analyticCareful problem: What Are The Problems?
1.Depletion Of Resources
2.Polluted Air And Water of → of Massive Production Of Rubbish / Manufacturing To Meet The Need Of Consumption
3.Unfriendly Housing Price And Congested Roads of → of Short Supply Of Land
4.Stressful Workplace of → of Way Too Many Contestants / Replacements. . . (still have certainly a lot of)
We discover immediately " agree " apparently good write.
The 1st paragraph
Verb of The World Suffers [is contained " evaluation " colour, choose here " negative opinion " verb] From Many Problems. Of Overpopulation of vocabulary of theme of Most Of Them Are Attributed To The Excessive Size Of Population [replace] .
The 2nd paragraph
Can write into the sentence that states a form of course, but, of expression " pattern " depend on: Write with fictitious mood: To Begin With, if There Were Not A Population Of This Current Size, humans Would Not Need To Exploit The Great Deal Of Resources To Meet The Immense Needs. Therefore, it Is Fair To Attribute The Depletion Of Resources To Overpopulation. [Notice sequence of thought of style or manner of writing: If write land natural resources, keep a problem newly namely, and if write,produce even if a kind " postpone " : Arrive from resource production] Also Because Of The Enormous Size Of Population, manufacturing Has To Be Intense, and While It Produces Usable Products, sewage of – of It Produces The Undesirable By-products, gas, and Landfill Refuse. Thus, it Is Fair To Trace The Root Of The Problem Of Pollution Back To Overpopulation. [Land problem and traffic problem are too immediate, if continue to be written in this paragraph, write into running water Zhang likely. Do not write in this paragraph so, move after that next stage: Basically write " sociality " problem]
The 3rd paragraph
[Notice paragraph joins directly] Not Only Does Overpopulation Cause [is advertent here install a phenomenon] The Above Immediate Problems, it Also Has The Following Impact On Our Society. In Many Countries And Areas, land Can No Longer Accommodate The Large Populations, and, as A Result, the Housing Price Is Unfriendly And Stressful. Nor Does The Land Have The Space For The Colossal Volumes Of Traffic, and The Consequence Is That People Are Always In A Bad Mood As They Are Constantly Stuck. The Stress Extends To The Workplace. [" short sentence " law, the rhythm that dominates news] The Large Population Means A Large Number Of Contestants For Jobs. In This Overpopulated Society, finding A Job Is Not Easy, and Keeping One Is Also Difficult Because Employers Can Always Find Replacements Among The Large Population. It Follows That Many Of Social Problems Also Result From Overpopulation.
The 4th paragraph
The World Has Many Problems. In Light Of The Above, I Am Certain That Most Of Those Problems Are The Result Of Overpopulation.
