On April 1, teleplay " travel length a song " already OK original video platform views the 8th market. The content of before be based on 8 collect will talk, the individual thinks, " long song goes " quality is general, the actor is chosen on existence problem, and the show that drama makes says an attitude, with narrative sense, can't say had better work. Go up in narrative sense especially, can't ring audience.
Say an actress first choose on. In " long song goes " in the center, wu Lei personate a young general with nomadic north. The performance manner of this Tong Xing, be too soft really. Wu Lei presents the part that come out, essential unlike is to drink all the day eat the meat equestrian the nomad youth that fight. In teleplay " long song goes " in the center, the Wu Lei with soft faint continous always gives a person the sense that a kind of below one second is about to play game. On face of this youth actor, still suckle oil gas too heavy, suit to perform those green love theatrical work as before, especially campus love drama. " long song goes " the hero in the center, want to have a few hale energy of life at least, ability lets audience be convinced. Regrettablly, wu Lei is done not have.
Dilireba is in " travel length a song " in the center appear aged. This is a thing that does not have method very much. Tang Dynasty princesses get married, should compare contemporary a lot of earlier. Make in drama in the center, this princess still does not have the age that marries a person, so, part age just also is ten years old. And Dilireba supplies a part, be the one countenance that plants 30 years old to rely on to go up even. Of course, actor him Dilireba, actual age still is less than 30 years old. Without method, the actor's face wait for condition, had decided, dilireba cannot control girl part.
Especially sequel among a few collect, of Dilireba dress up, male temperament is a few more sufficient, and the one side of female soft beauty, be short of badly break. To realistically teleplay work, on such colour values be short of break, what don't have however. However, this is theatrical work of a business, it is the love mode of history of built on stilts, leading role of male and female does not have the word of CP, breakneck. " long song goes " among the 8 collect that had broadcasted at present, male advocate face frail, female advocate face Yang Gang, actor feature and part person set serious strife, two are put together, also " not incoming telegram " . Think from angle of commercial theatrical work only, the leading role of this drama is chosen, be worth deliberate.
Say historical play says next. Play says the history, it is a problem, also not be a problem. " travel length a song " open a caption, write very clearly, this is not true history, it is dummy. This is the best response means of the audience of earnest to asking this teleplay has history. Before this drama broadcasts, had faced the problem that historical play says. On Li Shimin's problem, tang Dynasty on the problem of a few chancellery, wait a moment on the problem of Tujue of big Tang He, Huihe, original work caricature is put in historical mistake. In teleplay " long song goes " in the center, apparent and intended avoid these.
But, fictional historical story, form teleplay work, need notes a main creation ethics problem, that is, cannot keep a straight face taletelling, give an audience priggish sense. 229 years ago, among our teleplay market, appeared many placement is mixed in story of the fiction on the history history teleplay content. But, everybody grasps support a basic creation concept, laughing at taletelling namely, letting an audience know this is to tease child, cannot regard as real historical event. Better, have representative, namely " Kang Xi is small take illicit visit " and " Xiao Lan of discipline of tooth of iron tine copper " .
Laughing at taletelling, on the manner although disingenuous, but genuine to the history however, audience be clear at a glance, this is not earnest history, the play that is based on the history namely says, need not take seriously. This is responsible to the audience, also be can see a gender be in charge of to what drama makes. Watch instead " travel length a song " its problem is, it is play says the history obviously, return board move however face, put on a pair of likelihood that discusses official history to come. The manner of this kind of taletelling, the audience that had not gotten more historiography education easily to the part thinks by accident, drama is made tell, it is true history, it is the Tang Dynasty on our history. Keep a straight face taletelling of outfit official history, be inferior to really " Kang Xi " and " Ji Xiaolan " the laugh of those drama is worn had told.
Say the problem that the story of this teleplay feels too weak finally. Teleplay work, it is You Xiaoqiao paragraph comprise with big clue. Many little bridges paragraph, form a big plot, many big clues, comprise work of a teleplay. And teleplay wants narrative sense is strong, must want to rife big clue just goes. Big clue is only rich, ability has too many visitors or business to deal with one kind to the audience feeling. Watch this instead " travel length a song " , the story is technical go up, the biggest question is little bridge paragraph many, but narrative rate of progress is too slow, this is the reason with big too little clue.
Create little bridge paragraph, very easy. But, to a teleplay, want to have rich big plot, need abundant creation power to just go. Much affusion theatrical work, it is big clue little, little bridge paragraph excessive fill. " travel length a song " broadcast 8 collect, rate of progress is too slow, effective big clue not only little, and be spun to change processing by excessive ground. Playwrite gives a person a kind of sense that turns on the water intentionally.
Will look at present, " long song goes " type style is not quite straightforward, playwrite people initiative creation concept is not quite unified also. This drama leaves bureau a few collect, do not know what oneself want, also do not know the style finalizes the design, it is good to cast its place to specific audience. This drama question is more, from good-looking, still needing a space. (civil / Ma Qingyun)