The 8 decoy ｜ that mature writer escapes hard also misses your loss but too big

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When designing leading role, we should measure leading role above all from two big fields.

The leading role that cannot promote novel incident quite actively to develop is sure the leading role that is the sort of passivity, perhaps model in the character on existence has drawback, make leading role does not have the capacity that realizes a desire.

Have some of literature theorist in recent years literary work move the category that affection makes gone full range accept theory, they think to move affection action whether generation basically is by reader oneself idiosyncratic will decide. On this I do not consider a debate, because this is a need after all,the reader participates in ability to produce the function of action.

But I still think, whether generation moves action key is in affection to whether be at the author in work infuse can produce this affective ingredient for the reader. This also is meant, if the author was not in,the deep-seated disposition that the feeling that gives certain mankind applicable to both or all and applicable to both or all announce in the novel conflicts, if do not have the deep content of novel figure and reader applicable to both or all to evoke the reader's emotion,react, we ask the reader moves affection can be a fruitless approach only.

These 8 mistakes resemble be being buried in 8 trap on our advancement road, very hard the author can be avoided completely in the past, have among them a blemish, the novel can give an issue with respect to hard to avoid, be worth us to draw lessons from particularly so.

This is the problem of a commonsensible sex, but the writer that does not represent maturity won't make this kind of mistake.

Cite a simple case, the attitude that Song Jiang brings to instructing, he Likui is completely different for certain, the setting of one's life experience of on Liang Shan each person is different, the manner nature that installs finally to instructing is different also, the manner of everybody should accord with his educational setting and political identity.

If Song Jiang resembles Chen Sheng Wu An namely,heaven and earth of give somebody a new lease on life of absorbed in that way ground sets a royal or imperial government again, the reader is to be able to feel very bright, but you think carefully, in that times, in Song Jiang in that way below the setting limitation of one's previous experience, is this true?

For instance aspire of a Chinese wants to deliver good news to Africa, hand the order of Jesus Christ to the whole world, even if may have such person in real life, but the general acknowledge that disobeys a reader, still also be very difficult of be convinced making a person.

To a kind of any literature forms that are carrier with story clue, the character is modelled with character desire must conform to, only such, the reader just can believe the character realizes his desire likely. 

The ambition of a person always follows his ability photograph to match, very few somebody has the desire that exceeds oneself when capacity is insufficient, the target with Sun Wu prime sky is day joy, the end that seeks celestial being later is immortal not old, having what want after competence is the acknowledgement of the middle of forhead, do one party overlord.

If Sun Wu is empty from give competence of survival it doesn't matter to stand on beautiful fruit hill case " Qi Tian mahatma " banner, with respect to both neither reasonable not wonderful also.

When still doing not have what ability so-called should become what kind of person, exceed oneself besides ability have a kind of person only, amuse namely than, for instance cherry wood beautiful path alleges everywhere oneself are a talent, the key is funny comparing also is a talent really, the capability index that accords with him... of course, the condition that designs those hampering that leading role realizes a desire also is likewise important.

Wanting wind to get wind to want rain to get pluvial demand is absolutely no good, implementation any target should be passed ninety-nine thousand seven hundred and ninety-one difficult, the result that has gone through an innumerable trials and hardships to get ability adequate weight, and the block up that jumps over hardships and dangers, exceed the interest that can arouse a reader.

Passive leading role is a disaster, even if of your depict is the Lin Daiyu of extremely delicate, she also can cry to torment Baoyu with tear die partly.

Assume a shipwreck comes over, the part is sitting lifeboat is in afloat billowy maritime, come up from the fact say whats he may be faced with dead menace and are done, likelihood you cannot according to really so write.

Leading role drifts with the tide so, a buccal ground has the food on lifeboat and water, lie in cabin twice to visit a day next, while still alive by starved to death, the past still was yearned for before dying probably, cried, can what does such story have to you can look?

Gut resembles ocean, the character resembles a boat, the boat although apparently look be like is the sweeps across next face to secure direction in ocean current drifts, but prep against wave is only actually refluent and the boat that board just has a story.

The strange unreal that thinks the teenager is sent is seaborne, not absolutely? The part is in all conditions limitary place, also did a lot of things to change his destiny.

When Buddhist nun of calm thinking peaceful overcomes date to sink, if outstanding gram just follows Rose be separated from and lose touch with each other, fell into sea mile to drown, although same is sea of dead Yu Bing, the love that same is two people stops abruptly, leading role chooses to die and go passively dead, is the result same?

We must be gotten remember well a bit, the action of leading role is the vitality of novel incident.

If the leading role of the novel resembles cheeper cartoon film medium leading role is same, have an onefold and clear desire only first and last, onefold desire designs all and complex scenario and character, so of this novel drab canned be imagined.

Grey too the life aim of the wolf should eat Yang Yang namely, division division witch should catch blue spirit namely, bully day tiger should grab energy piece namely.

Does your part also have an onefold desire only? In that way word also did not become a scrip person, must carry that famous sci-fi here " 3 body " , a lot of people return that part that adores particularly, chapter the North sea.

The teacher thinks the storehouse very much ask, what what can be worth to like does a such part have?

Chapter the North sea comes on the stage from the story begin to arrive all the time terminal, life has an objective only, that is " know the extraterrestrial comes, plan take flight, fling caution to the winds ground desert! Fling caution to the winds ground desert!!

The father in his life was done not have, also did not have close affection, never love, his impeach has the person of likewise fugitive target with oneself, do not cooperate with anybody, without the friend, the flight is quickened to leave ground before big fight begins, became the army deserter on battlefield already, abandoned oneself comrade-in-arms again, he does not have brother.

He was not himself even this target has any sway and suspect, not any struggle and relapse, he does not have other desires, without defect, without individual target, do not have the thought billows of little even, all all effort are to capture essence those who go up " blue demon " , such one compressed the part design that change, what distinction does witch of case following pattern have? Say so, the self-conscious desire that fictionist must want to realise to exist at the same time on leading role body clearly and subconscious medium not self-conscious desire, because give priority to horn,not self-conscious desire is the good place that fictionist exhibits talent greatly, it is the expressive means of character dimension main force, be leading role " the soul " , also be the deepest wide gap in the novel and a gathering place of fish orbeasts that dig the deepest opinion.

This also is the mistake of sex of a common sense, the leading role of the novel should realize a desire, want the action, must get the psychokinesis that has the body that can control oneself and idea, if we are modelled in the character in did not give priority to the psychokinesis with horny corresponding infuse, what he creates a constituency very easily in the action later is incomprehensible.

To leading role psychokinesis quantify a problem, do not have a person to be able to make the provision of rigid, normally the circumstance falls, his desire is supported in wanting the psychokinesis of leading role to be able to conflict in incident only, the sense is created in letting him can act finally great and it is OK to cannot go against the turn that turn.

Psychokinesis is superfluous the allergy that causes a reader easily also, hit amaranthine forever for instance small strong, the person is being enrolled to wait for the role that see to be afraid least of all in holy fighter is astral arrow.

And opposite Yu Qilong bead Li Yongyuan maintains last victory by force with psychokinesis for the enemy of impossible conquer, the part in full-time hunter more appear true and absorbing, because they will be scared, can fear, encounter is defeated, when can ability not equal to one's ambition and spirit break down, this is Japanese fistfight caricature in this on one hand tremendous progress, this are worth us to draw lessons from very much.

The opposite of this kind of mistake, that is leading role invincible, all-conquering, all work go well, family property is flourishing, government-owned money two fill, die Cheng Xiang.

Apparent, the character of type of Li Su of this kind of Ma, sure in literary work it is the most insipid leading role, because, this kind of leading role that does not have any danger and setback arouses the reader's curiosity without method really.

Since respecting part fails this, the teacher says the storehouse more here, indefectible part has what charm very hard, a word says well, the boxing king that had not toppled on boxing stage is faulty.

And also have in traditional novel similar, for instance the Guan Yu in the the Three Kingdoms is mixed Zhang Fei, because model,getting too too powerful, too too perfect the range that exceeded an ordinary person to be able to believe, so the author designed similar final result ably to them: "Die in bromide hand. "Die in bromide hand..

Come so, instead makes the part appears truer and authentic, no matter adversary uses the method that is meanness to still kill in the dark, they also have in a word laic one side, appear opposite more true and authentic.

And contrast rises, the ending of die in one's bed of Zhao Yun Machao is a bit insufficient fresh, these two roles are more similar, it is valiant and inapproachable, have not be defeated all one's life, character does not have blemish again, it is so perfect everywhere, so perfect that let a reader have distance feeling.

As contrary as this, additionally one kind of mistake is the opportunity that leading role is without get victory, the writer that designs this kind of story knew leading role to should produce a turn in the setback apparently, lend this promotion the principle of fight level, but at the same time he also is to be in become rigid ground to apply this principle.

Want to know, a kind of any pursuit are a kind labyrinthian before the way of travel, although be among the life nonexistent also be without joy of life, 100 battle the 100 figures that defeat, so, when designing novel incident, we should gain the opportunity that wins finally possibly to leading role at least, otherwise this leading role enters lack with respect to possible fall psychokinesis is top-ranking, let a reader lose interest to him. Will tell to fictionist, miserly give leading role to win to resemble grudging like giving leading role failure, what can create incident process is drab and bored.

Do not say the chestnut of literary respect, make an example it is extremely difficult that you encounter one paragraph pole bad play, played one day to had not lived 3 minutes, and without any award and points system, can you still like it?

Which game did not eat gold coin to must equip is this kind rewarded randomly? If game has difficulty only, lost its glamour of 80% above, even if award is the fictitious money with trashy nonsense, also can make a player excited rise.

Leading role cannot arise move the reason of action has feeling a lot of, on this problem, we should distinguish Hunan to sympathize with above all with move affection these two kinds of concepts.

With move situation is same, sympathizing with also is to begin to be opposite at the reader the attention of leading role, the place that is leading role and affection drew the reader's attention.

However, sympathizing with this kind of affection is one kind comparatives however light weak mood, its intensity won't surmount the commiserative heart that to meeting with the person of calamity produces when look on sb's trouble with indifference, be the sort of standing high above the masses the care that award comes down, among the destiny that right now the reader shares leading role without real ground.

To the novel, sympathizing with this kind of affection is dispensable, because its intensity is too low, let a reader easily also keep apart oneself and leading role self-consciously aloof at the same time come.

With sympathize with photograph comparing, move affection is the sort of affection activity that participates in personally by the reader, court libidinal success and failure as leading role, the reader can experience as same as leading role feeling clearly to fluctuate, sensitive to some reader will tell, they regarded themselves as even the leading role of the novel.

Fictionist makes this kind move in reader feeling the method of action has feeling a few kinds big.

Simple for, the its reader that is part experience also has been experienced, perhaps can imagine the sense that gives the sort of experience at least.

For instance you this job picture must rip an unripe child the heart cracks lung, male audience looked is one face forever muddled force.

The thing can let reader generation move as to what affection action, the intuition that must rely on you goes imagining, the reader can arise as you move affection action, say a conte:

The teacher and student that our move reached to be built newly is upstairs study by oneself in scheduled time late, protestant room is neat and bright, the solar tube that becomes a platoon takes class so that resemble same by day. I sit in window edge to immerse oneself in see caricature, now and then look up activity the neck of acerbity hemp, turn round, see beside bright and clean glass shows his handsome sign. Then, I arranged a hair to my shadow instinctively, strange, was that shadow moved actually? What circumstance? I made a mask used as a toy to shadow again then, shadow still was not moved! I develop shadow brandish angrily brandish fist, shadow is motionless still! Absurd? I cannot help bending over to go up in glazing, outside blocking both sides day with both hands, look... I strap a music, it is classmaster! 

Do a lot of people look this story to you can have the feeling that understanding laughs at? The mysterious classmaster of the move stands outside the windowsill after night studies by oneself in scheduled time, ever was the nightmare of how many person, the reader has had this kind of mood to experience, move very easily to your story generation affection psychology.

The be interlinked place that 3 o'clock is place and behavior. What be necessary to emphasize on this is, the place of novel figure and behavior most can surmount the life of Everyman, the adversary that novel leading role encounters wants more powerful, the difficulty of experience is more terrible, adopted action is more violent, expressive feeling is stronger also.

To move action allows condition your novel is immersed in ordinary and dull trifling, also cannot take.

What when the reader opens a book, hope is go together as the author adventure, is not to see tea of fuel sauce vinegar, even if be most the rustic love that ground connection enrages, the rural life of depict also has typical sex certainly, you an unfamiliar the sort of.

Oh oneself are written how to love a girl greatly in the novel that I had seen a lot of readers, how to profession to her, if why wait for her downstairs in schoolgirl dormitory, how are two people immersed in be passionately in love, go to see a movie together, a cafe lunch in romance, how did final girl abandon this paragraph of love because of gold, how do oneself cry by the side of the basketball field in the dirty night...

The story above is to be written it seems that give an extravagantly colourful description, but this kind of novel attracts a reader very hard, move affection action is to have, the reader understands you very easily experience, but after looking, won't remember your story.

He himself can experience the 10 thousand stories that all over in the life, work the novel that reads you even?

The film that is Zhao Wei " send us eventually will parting youth " , be patted so that use a heart? Very attentively, be patted truthlessly? Very true, dormitory of school of prop of dress of story setting character is waited a moment, reproduced the panorama of that times almost, can be a story too " simple and true " , the audience looked to have move affection action, felt what to be short of from beginning to end however, actually, those who be short of is this is planted " the uniqueness of the story " .

Sitannisilafusiji has said: "Typical person, typical incident. Typical incident..

Lacked typical sex, what lacked story presence is necessary, zhou Xing gallop modelled countless all one's life classical " nobody " figure, among them every nobody has very bright typical feature almost, make an audience impressive.

But he also has modelled a failure " nobody " figure, that is the Yangtse River the 7 poor and abjection father in date, zhou Xing gallop is acting bad? Either, however this part is lacked too " typical sex " , lost before of his part additional at the same time, he too ground connection was enraged, ground connection resembles an incompetent laborer a bit overly angrily, then, became his lifetime most unsuccessful part.

This is the mistake of a simple palpability, also be the mistake that fictionist is creating regular meeting of the classics in the process to make however. We had known leading role is the core of the novel, so in inventing a process, we are about to safeguard this core carefully, cannot let other novel figure get on the reader's attention from leading role body draw away. But this does not mean less important character to must get few like that bored.

Rather, each less important character that come on the stage should be had quite the interest sex of degree, but sex of this kind of interest is by the exterior feature that makes clear simply and character dimension is formed, his integrated gout must be gotten under leading role, the effect that he has in incident and the space that have want little at leading role.

Spoken parts in an opera is not to want a presumptuous guest usurps the host's role.

Even if you are capable villain in drama or costar is written so that lifelike makes a person impressive, also must notice, did not let less important character rob the drama of leading role.

The film " the action that break a sword " the example that is a model, so that what leading role calls the name are you still written down? But I believe major person can the name that ask for a favor speaks villain in drama.

To batty a person adept in martial arts and given to chivalrous conduct, is antic why a part models the nightmare that go up? He let batty a person adept in martial arts and given to chivalrous conduct become the appear with anther leading player of the story simply, the one party that makes whole story decent appears wretched and dull, this is the harm of a presumptuous guest usurps the host's role, if you can be modelled,give a success to be like antic and same villain of course, also be additionally one kind of success.

This is an omnibus mistake, also be the biggest mistake that fictionist can commit.

Before discussing this topic, we should assume fictionist is in first of the novel piece do very well with main body part, character design and structural design do not have visible defect, otherwise fictionist can be beaten by other mistake first, also commit this pile without the qualification " crime " .

Say this is one picket " crime " , because this is the climax with last novel,be, it is not reversible turning point, make a mistake in this place, also be equal to in front all effort fail to build a mound for want of one final basket of earth-fall short of success for lack of a final effort. When fictionist is writing a novel, the mainest attention should be put on the turning point this finally, all effort that make in front are to can be in final dramatic scene let leading role make only choice, cause cannot go against the change that turn.

This often is the sort of " two kill photograph authority to take its to weigh " or " authority of two benefit photograph takes his light " the choice of special rule, also be like this only, ability makes a result not reversible, make the contradiction in disposition of leading role depth is able to break out, ability lets novel affection and reader affection reach a climax at the same time.

But, after if be in,reaching a climax, in the reader's brains abrupt however between generated question, put forward such as " if he is not returned choose to divorce however beside the wife how " , or " if he does not commit suicide to be pretended however surrender, come ' be in in Cao Ying heart personally Chinese ' how " , then, the final climax that elaborate literary composition builds fictionist is in this is flashy broke down.

Need an attention is, the part does not have optional choose and ending of open mode plot not to conflict.

For instance the film " brave enters the island that seize a life " in final Nigulasikaiji the leading role of personate, let off should catch originally return the old secret service in the jail, apparently it seems that the part has option it seems that.

He can catch him, OK also practise favouritism put him.

But actually from the development of the story a general name for arteries and veins looks, leading role does not have option actually, he should make right choice, want to do a good person, with respect to the dignity that must violate the influence in him hand and so-called law, must break conventions, the heart that chooses him comply with.

Once, the friend that blessing building does obeisance to visits him in his home, discover the door does not have a lock, push open the door to do obeisance to volt to go up to crying greatly in cry loudly in his desktop to building viewing happiness however, the friend was psyched out, hasten then what to ask the thing in the past, blessing Lou Bai is brushing tear at the same time at the same time sad wail path, madam of the benefit that include a method died!

Who is dead?

Wrap law benefit madam, the heroine of my novel...

Mouth of this ability long Shu Yi enrages the friend, you are an author, if you so not be willing to part with or use, flat do not let her absolutely refuse to have to?

Blessing Lou Bai shakes bitterly shake one's head, not, in my story, she is not dead cannot!

The teacher often says the storehouse this: After a successful novel part creation comes out, it is not to get author pilot, he wants what to do, have what kind of destiny, early had been destined...

[today's class is a bit senior, but the teacher assures the storehouse sentence sentence it is a dried food, everybody can grind repeatedly read a few times, digest, believe the meeting writing to you has very great help... ]