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Solution to a problem of model of proposition of composition of countrywide the university entrance exam read center of exam of Ministry of Education 2019 (2)
Examination questions:
Read the material below, the basis asks to compose.
① day goes be good at, gentleman with constantly strive to become stronger. (" Zhouyi " )
② is shown from tonight white, lunar hereat countryside bright. (Du Fu)
Why does ③ need shallow green jade cardinal, in naturally flower first-rate. (Li Qing is illuminated)
④ gets light at front courtyard door see, suffer light to illuminate all directions at the world. (Wei Yuan)
⑤ must dare to face up to, this ability is expected to have the courage to think, dare say, dare make, dare become. (Lu Xun)
⑥ counts talented person, still see today. (Mao Zedong)
Chinese culture is broad and profound, countless a later ages that change Yo. Read above 6, do you have what kind of feeling and think? Please with among them 3 two decide conception for the foundation, reasonable cite, write an article. The requirement is free angle, make clear style, draft caption oneself; Do not cover, must not borrowed; Not less than 800 words.
Depict " China culture " mental a collection of illustrative plates
-- solution to a problem of model of proposition of composition of the university entrance exam read center of exam of Ministry of Education 2019 (3)
Center of exam of Ministry of Education will whole nation of the university entrance exam is new 2017 class mark (Ⅱ coils) inscribe as propositional 2019 appearance " dispatch troops famous " : At the beginning of 2017, print and distribute of the Central Committee of Communist Party of China, the State Council " strengthen China inheritance of outstanding and traditional culture and education " relevant opinion, of the same age begins the university entrance exam the regulation also is made clear in outline " the check that reinforces pair of traditional culture " requirement. Ought to say the whole nation (Ⅱ coils) " celebrity logion " composition proposition is active exploration when center of exam of Ministry of Education implements this one spirit in the round, become necessarily set an example, produce far-reaching effect to the proposition henceforth.
Propositional feature: Depict " China culture " mental a collection of illustrative plates
Choose " classical celebrity logion " propositional, the feeling after requirement examinee tries to explain or writing to read a kind article, at all times and in all over the world is uncommon precedent. 2017 (Ⅱ coils) propositional person commendable place depends on staying in traditional and simple propositional formally, reform propositional content and form boldly however, strive is explored and start style of proposition of composition of new period the university entrance exam, come true thereby " establish De Shuren " , make an on-the-spot investigation in the round " core accomplishment " propositional tenet. Its are main feature: It is, draw the outline of for examinee " China culture " mental a collection of illustrative plates. Look from propositional material, 6 logion from antediluvian arrive contemporary, the mind spirit that line place shows, accomplishment of the mind aspiration that covered a great person, ideal pursuit, character, critically spirit, draw the outline of for examinee " China culture " mental a collection of illustrative plates, thematic limits is made clear and center. 2 be, own combination develops requirement examinee each sex changes originality. Look from propositional requirement, "Decide conception for the foundation with 3 two among them " , although master to give examinee larger own alternative space, but also be to examinee the thought is accumulated at the same time, what culture precipitation, logic pushs develop and even innovation capability is integrated make an on-the-spot investigation. This is the feature with the most striking proposition.
Solution inscribes train of thought: Describe " China culture " bosom of domestic national condition
? Foundation: The thought that examines logion of propositional material a person of academic or artistic distinction afresh is embedded reach meantime acting setting
"The day goes be good at, gentleman with constantly strive to become stronger " , language piece " Zhouyi · elephant is passed " , its fall sentence be " relief female, gentleman holds thing with thick heart " . Two means, the motion of the day is doughty strong be good at, gentleman plays, should resemble a day same, do one's best progresses, make a determined effort the figure is strong; The earth inducts sunshine moist everythings on earth, gentleman humanness should add thick goodness, set oneself an example to others. Its gist is, constantly strive to become stronger, gritty, strenuous promising, enterprising get right on the job. "Dew from tonight white, lunar hereat countryside bright " , of Du Fu of poet of line out Tang Dynasty " moonlight recall abandon younger brother " , carelessness is " from rise to enter White Dew solar term tonight, the moon still is birthplace is the brightest. " bring Shi Zhi chaos, brotherly disperse, have never been heard of since, the author is roused in strange defend and dew of autumn night month is viewed and admire in sound of Gu wild goose, times gain the favour that thinks of countryside to recall younger brother. Du Fu sees in drift from place to place the land of country is broken, the people are plunged into an abyss of misery, be unable to bear or endure to be a bitterness for the country extremely. Its gist is, no matter be great poet, still be crop common people, should have attention reality, think of nostalgia to kiss, think of a feelings that considers a state.
"Why Xu Jianbi is cardinal, in naturally flower first-rate " , li Qing of person of pronoun of out the Song Dynasty illuminates " sweet-scented osmanthus of · of Chinese francolin day " , this word with group the flower makes line, make with wintersweet than, expressive word person praises to the from the bottom of one's heart of sweet-scented osmanthus. Flower of course with red for the United States, as to and so on of plum of green jade peony, green calyx, more rare. Sweet-scented osmanthus appearance is not distinctive, color is not inviting, but " dim fizzle out gently " , " affection scanty mark is far " and fragrant is sweet from fragrant. Immanent beauty, more more important than explicit beauty, this is the author's self-confidence, be female word person is special stand to go alone, pursue top-ranking high-minded ambition, it is a name more sentence gist place. "Get light at front courtyard door see, all directions is illuminated below Yu Tian getting light " , source of language out the Kingdom of Wei, latter-day ideologist, politician and writer. Former word of Wei Yuan is: Get light at unoccupied place see one bed, suffer light to see room end at the window, get light at front courtyard door see, suffer light to illuminate all directions at the world. Clearly, the size of eye shot, the size of pattern decides the understanding of a person to the thing; Have continuous study and practice only, eye shot ability is open and broad. This sufficient also body reveals an author " amount to a the world holding aid concurrently " rich great mind.
"Must dare to face up to, this ability is expected to have the courage to think, dare say, dare do, dare become " , this is the thought of Lu Xun, means encounters everything, do not escape, only such, ability achieves ultimate goal. Face up to reality, face up to oneself, a variety of with oneself inadequacy with accurate real knowledge are waited a moment, ability can go forth likely. Have the courage to think ability dare be done, dare be done even if be brave in to take on, no matter victory and defeat comes with common heart,treat. The gist of this logion is, face up to reality, do not escape hardships and dangers, precipitant. This is the bones and muscles of flagman of a culture and sober self-awareness, it is to be a nation beat and the responsibility that breathe out and take on. "Count talented person, still see today " , this is word of Mao Zedong poem " ooze garden spring · snow " medium name sentence. Means even if historical emerge in large numbers goes out lots and lots of heroic character, this makes the history after all, the country nowadays, master nowadays in hand, the hero that todays only, ability sees the difficulty of now! "Now " it is a new era, new era needs new tasteful figure, have more remarkable ability, and be sure create all-time and great outstanding achievement, this is the responsibility that the poet also is cacique takes on, sturdy self-confidence and great aspiration.
? Key: Unripe in compare hair, beg in be well versed in new, search in oppose unified
If ask according to proposition " decide conception for the foundation with 3 two among them " if, the combination of examinee, integrated or recombine ability to become the premise with be the most fundamental. And this kind of combination has thinking principle, should compare both or 3 person oneness and otherness, want unripe in compare hair, beg in be well versed in new. "Why Xu Jianbi is cardinal, in naturally flower first-rate " , li Qing illuminates special self-confidence, this is a talented woman's high-minded to oneself self-confidence; "Count talented person, still see today " , mao Zedong is extremely self-confident, this is the self-confidence of a cacique, it is the self-confidence that liberates to the nation. Self-confidence is the source power that our people culture expands. "Dew from tonight white, lunar hereat countryside bright " , du Fu's actual to the society care, body is right now family member, to national affection; "Must dare to face up to, this ability is expected to have the courage to think, dare say, dare do, dare become " , the care with actual to the society Lu Xun, body is right now coma person cry out, reflect in a mission person take on. "Get light at front courtyard door see, all directions is illuminated below Yu Tian getting light " , wei Yuan told about the philosophic theory of an eye shot and pattern to us on the space; "Count talented person, still see today " , mao Zedong is experienced personally with his revolutionary practice from spatio-temporal go up we are how-to ongoing direction. " Zhouyi " the fountainhead that medium constantly strive to become stronger is our people culture, ethos, but the nobleness that thes upper part of the body according to the body in Li Qing those who show is person of a female word, what reflect on Lu Xun body is flagman of a culture take on, go up to reflect the lofty aspirations and great ideals that gives leader of a nation personally in Mao Zedong. The spirit of constantly strive to become stronger is born in our nation be born not to cease carry forward.
"An ice heart is in jade crock " , if go from higher level,be combined or integrated, looking be like in opposing, search unified, the sufficient body that this also is relative superiority or inferiority of class of thinking character layer now, we can produce more development to think: propositional clou, have baronial ethical feeling already, have deep birthplace feeling again -- ability having a state has the home, ability having the home has a state; Already base oneself upon struggles at ego the feelings, rich great mind that has attention society reality again -- the destiny that the destiny of the motherland is an individual; Have the style interest of ego already, the lofty ideal feelings that again a country dedicates -- the gene that they built development of our people culture to expand jointly. These feelings let us see happiness, see a hope, see a dream with respect to forwardly. They are the celebrity of culture of our country history, they are representing the outstanding gene of culture of the Chinese nation, their plump, deep, clever inner world, let us see the wisdom in life, gout, state. These names sentence the manna that is happiness, it is helpful for enhancing the Chinese's moral integrity, the culture that reveals a nation is self-confident; Be helpful for developing common ideal and drive; Be helpful for condensing the force of compatriots, invigorate people to stride exuberantly ahead flourishingly.
? Crucial: "The broad and profound, later ages that change Yo " , describe home national condition is conceived
"Chinese culture is broad and profound, countless a later ages that change Yo. " is this propositional in most does directional clew mix the theme of core to ask the most basically -- renown sentence be how " the later ages that change Yo " ? What to perhaps say you got " change Yo " ? Although do not need answer of examinee interlocution type, but must be mind spirit with this perforative full text. What should emphasize more is " read above 6, do you have what kind of feeling and think? " propositional demarcate, requirement examinee draws up " feeling and think " it is certainly " you " , is not other. This also is propositional person the instruction sex job that gives examinee make known to lower levels, must finish outstandingly.
Teenager spirit, times fragrant China. Propositional person depict for examinee " a collection of illustrative plates of China culture spirit " meaning, be in again let examinee be with this guide, describe is contemporary youth with soul of great mind, air, go brave carries the Chinese nation great revived heavy burden, with sturdy ethical self-confidence force and intense culture sense of pride become the main force that good inheritance culture, innovation expands, new force. Teenager spirit is sure to blossom the most beautiful times fragrant China. The thematic content of these core sexes should be permeated everywhere in style or manner of writing or reflect adequately.
Real significance: Inheritance " China culture " thought marrow
The Chinese nation is having long history and bright culture, propositional person the mental a collection of illustrative plates that with 6 great people 6 logion depict for us is the typical delegate in China culture, the ideal that they reflect adequately and belief itself are the main component of China culture. Review the development history of core of thought of Chinese ancient time, these ideal and belief, of long standing and well established, come down in one continuous line, kongyue dies for a righteous cause, meng Yue is taken justice, father is esteemed do-nothing, village to freedom, mo Zi is told hold love concurrently, han Fei talks about law, zhu Xi is heavy providential, wang Mingyang sends conscience... be in just about in accede ceaselessly and developing, tell kindheartedness, heavy civilian this, shou Chengxin, chong Zhengyi, to and close, seek concept of old coequal idea, become the mental kernel of China culture gradually, become the ideal with common the Chinese nation and belief. And in the pursuit to ideal and belief and practice, the volition of the consciousness that the Chinese nation formed brave and tough spirit, be prepared for danger in times of safety again, Shen Shishen's condescending and small disposition, civilized moral character, remain faithful and unyielding, with the wisdom that abandons a Tibet, acting acting according to legend.
Historical proof, any any anybody, societies, nations, wanted to have ambitious and great ideal and sturdy and persistent belief only, had conquer all difficult courage and force, can all-conquering, invincible, in the course that pursueing ideal and belief, reveal the value of life and sense. The ideal that China children place goes after and belief, it is self-confidence of self-respect of the Chinese nation of free-standing self-improvement idiosyncratic, come thousands of years, firewood fire according to legend, carry forward ceaselessly.
Editor | Zhang Xinjuan
