The class discusses article case on today, citing the friend that fore part friend writes encircles article table. Discovery writes it may not be a bad idea of advertisement article table, hair friend encircles may as well, the train of thought of writing is interlinked. Although table of friend group language is short, the vital organs of the human body is whole also, reveal as follows simply, the hope can be created to article table of everybody offer train of thought.
Next that day in the evening coming home, headaching intolerable Ge You lies on sofa, received the friend small letter that for a long time does not contact, say to hope to help keep an article record. Demand is as follows:
"Special take a heart not Philistine " ... I am breathed out, the article table that does not have specific requirement so the more is written harder. And as an article table, the most painful is to tell you suddenly to keep an article record, want immediately next, seem to write article table to deliver small gain with plain general like, say to come. Did not understand, did not brew, without the foreplay, I do it from which. But I am not good at suffer from reject a person, and it is very long the friend that did not contact. I answered, lying to begin to keep article record like Ge You.
The product that friend hair is below pursues, I search from which cut a point, bear shut up water to browse quickly please:
For " not Philistine " , I chose 3 names to show literary product a bit: Tendril jumps over berry ox to plunge into cheese of cloud of Durian of crisp, freeze-dry, double berry. Plunge into besides the ox actually crisp, I had not eaten, do not know what ingredient. Especially cheese of double berry cloud, what be east east I am completely muddled, asked a friend what tastes so. Cough, before this specification keeps alimental article record, very be necessary to take experience product first. Friend, you saw...
Had next below table of this paragraph of article:
My writing train of thought is, if say food is delicious, the word with again much delicate appearance also is lack of power, should look for a feeling to just be experienced to deep. For instance Gu Youxin abandons disease to describe sadness: However the weather is cool good autumn; Have expression today " like to be together with you " want to sing: I say the dim light of night is so beautiful tonight. Everybody also knows Wang Jiawei says I love 3 your words, can buy can of a paragraph of big pineapple. You look, it is a road. So if the girlfriend asks you new clothes is beautiful, must not answer the United States, you must say to as if returned 18 years old that flourishingly in the morning... then I write these things delicious, have to draw up go playing Zhen Shuang.
This kind plays not be empty, you must build setting, let an user as if place oneself among them. You think, in this beautiful spring, everybody is thought up, but office worker ah very miserable, the program about the journey the special offer remaining part that be confined to checks those who check travel website is only. When what be inferior to seeing these friends are encircled so is delicate, reward with food and drink oneself, taste the comes from nature flavour just to console oneself of distance.
How to let setting become setting, is is what travel about wanting to go homiletic? Must have detail, detail lets fictional story have picture feeling. Let you hear a foot to step on the noise of pine needle, let you recollect the happiness in Thailand seaside...
With reverence and awe, the other side still calculates satisfaction, can be to have new requirement, must write jerk. Because,at first I did not write jerk is this three word ah too ground connection is angry, do not do not Philistine. But Party A has need, our Party B gets comply with to carry out, I added Australia prairie again that.
Tell the truth, direction of table of this paragraph of article is right, but the sentence of detail I do not like, because use a word to lack new idea, sentence type is not quite fluent and natural. A paragraph of good article case, resemble a winding river certainly, music is eclectic endless. Table of this paragraph of article because time is brash, adscititious I headache to did not grind greatly at that time, sentence and the sense that lack rapid rushing water with the word. If you cannot discover, need to be recited aloud only can be aware of.
Favour good friend was not importuned, I am loath also report to the superior after accomplishing a task. Because tell article table to be taken,anatomize today, hope to be inspired somewhat to everybody. Make summary a bit: Determine demand first, analyse a product next, find sell nod and cut a point, compose establishs setting and old practice, repass detail makes a story lifelike, let an user produce picture move, call namely " take a heart " . As to " not Philistine " , pack through literary vocabulary, can reach. Identical, if make my ground connection angry, the meadow that I change Australia prairie into the country...
OK, who is willing to undertake optimizing to table of this paragraph of article? Write in the comment please. Write well, I send the candy of bovine make friends that jumps over berry without tendril to eat!
