This second book review comes from area of start book review
Storytelling person is a cheater -- head read " nightmare palace "
The story that becomes aware tell is good all the time and decorate a fraud meticulously to do not have substantially respectively, good or the story is bad, be similar to sell drug to the old lady, have of course cover a region, but this road is brillant have to see deceive get how many person.
Nightmare palace serves as the short story that forgets to see inaccessibly greatly, however unexpected ground is splendid.
First from " nightmare palace " a road of this fraud, namely story clue arrangement speaks of -- from read plan at present to tell, the skeleton of this story is very overbearing very old also hot, the purpose of each gut link is very clear.
Whole story from fall bewitching speaks of, pair of Yun Danfeng's light play chess, the tussle of a schoolbook class, will establish the person that has leading role Zhong Chen to set with this, the person says " arrogate to oneself of the person that arrogate to oneself weichis is sought " , leading role has ruse to movement has patience more apparently, when should awaiting not disease not Xu, fruit of this method when starting work definitely, such appearing, case model be a success apparently.
Good, the first batch of victim chooses this fraud successfully so far. Back-to-back, the 2nd chapter aids the disposition that leading role explained further in the person's clue, 3 outlook from wild temple, but this is not a key, the key was to bury a stalk in the dark, what is those who bury?
Save the animal slave that have from a conveniently impress of arteries and veins of blood of animal of derivative abstraction bewitching is nodded this,
Next, it is the plot that with the good friend that is bastard Zhong Yun makes ring of life and death, this plot action is very much also: Such as Zhong Chen asks with what can carry exclusively fine long hair is changed forthwith help fine medicine, this evidence is plump his person is set, build kind of true world, fine not easy, without giving thought to later how, leading role is at least have the person that the heart has warm blood first.
The clue is explained and again this spread out a series of the character concerns, continue for sequel " bunco " prepared enough " soldier " .
Finally, also transfer gut smoothly to palace of nightmare of derivative secret condition, nightmare palace be about to open, it is condition of a secret, this dispels doubts for the reader why does this book name so.
The rhythm of this one begin is very compact, without redundant gut, knife knife sees blood, sincere to the flesh, because this can say get on old hot, this is the arrangement of story clue.
Next, say tussle. Give typical examples:
Zhong Chen sees this sneers rise, the jade in the hand dish cast in past sky, in the meantime, sky of another hand empty delimits, in the hand immediately much a Geng of flaxen accord with, with the wind after flash, be in resplendent in half feet grows melt into jade feet, delimit to sky of around brook empty.
"Bang " after blare, whole brook is asp rise, brook water comes alive unexpectedly like towering and case, the water column with bulky and clinking melt into, firm firm bumps in the law blast on medium evil spirit body.
After this calls the evil spirit of wooden Kui essence the frightening cry, the feeling cannot keep out tremendous strength and body at all, enormous body quivers, if the horizontal stroke like gunny-bag flies off two a unit of length are much further go, green blood is mad in the mouth at the same time gush unceasingly, as if again cannot move.
Why to say the tussle that is schoolbook class? Likelihood at first view can feel very common, also do not have the way that cruel dazzles like lamp of what give an extravagantly colourful description, horse race and effect.
But under scrutiny, one has the tussle that the picture feels, means of target, method, blow, achieved result, and the way that resistance of the other side starts, reach a range in order to nod, have it is clear to will have an all.
This resembles is a formula, every link has, even if not Jing is colourful, at least does not have doubt. Make the cheater of a taletelling, have explain have detail, this thing is true. Otherwise, dong Yilang head on the west one wooden club, look at resembling is evil cult heretical.
Finally, say the characteristic of style or manner of writing of this story. Present fiction style or manner of writing pays attention to to change numerous for brief, extremely Jian Wenfeng, this is opposite with ace definitely " without action get the better of have action " same, need not bouquets of flowers and piles of silks-rich multicolored decoration, encumbrance is redundant, but all words, word is sure want essence of life to allow.
Change an appearance, do laugh and humour is two things, do laughing is endowment, it is novice village level, and humour must be after having sufficient experience, all the different kind all pays laughingstock in.
Big big about is an iron and steel straight male, what a lot of moment are like descriptive means 10 years one day is crude. Additional: Illicit think when doing not have other people to speak with leading role, solilo-quize " " explain gut, still use " but the word says " this kind of word, special is resembling a disease of essence of play essence snake? Leave next give typical examples, escape.
"Solved this Liao at long last! Hurry on with one's journey even preparative belt this, spent two many months fully, also cannot receive what cost so again later a group of things with common features inside the task. But the word says, if it were not for goes out this is for that thing actually, the task is only by the way and for, how won't also run otherwise. " Zhong Chen this ability countenance loosens, muttered twice.
