Recently, fan Bingbing because " contract of yin and yang " be instructed on schedule pay imposition, fine for delaying payment, amerce more than yuan 800 million, after the event sent excuse to believe in small gain with respect to this matter.
This thinking " contract of yin and yang " incident comes to an end at this point, but interesting is, of the teacher of a Chinese of some middle school " use local materials " with when all is entered, this excuse the letter should make example changing a fault take classroom.
On some Chinese class, the teacher puts excuse letter of Fan Bingbing on big screen, tagged syntactic, faulty wording or formulation to need amendatory place and reason with red pen.
The teacher expresses: The faulty wording or formulation in this letter is really too much, spit groove by a lot of netizens. I am born to Gao Sanxue fortunately review ABC, more sensitive to geometric ratio of punctuation, faulty wording or formulation, a faulty wording or formulation of more than 10 place in seeing a letter. Decide temporarily so, in regarding a problem changing a fault as to take today's classroom this letter, let a student carry pick bone.
Apologetic letter was used the first paragraph " think over, introspection " , but since be " excuse is believed " , that reoccupy " think over " it is redundant, should delete " think over " , withhold " introspection " ;
"Place the relation of national interest, society interest and individual interest " and " appear use ' fractionation contract ' wait for problem of dodge a tax " it is tie-in and undeserved;
"In film " big bomb " and a few otherer in the contract " in, " big bomb " and " a few otherer contract " paratactic and undeserved;
"The model that society and industry reach since is the first action " and " my disappoint the national education to me, disappoint the society is trustful to mine, also disappoint filmgoer loves to mine " it is word order undeserved;
"Lose ego to restrain " lack object center language;
"I am cordial the ground to the society, friend that cares me to care, and the masses, apologize to national tax authority. " it is logistic relation disorder;
"Do not have the care of people, put on the ice without Fanbing " illogical; "Contend for the good company that becomes rich culture connotation " it is dark change subject; "To care my friend family " in " friend family " have different meanings.
In addition, still have everywhere punctuation mistake, be in wrongly written or mispronounced characters.
Look now, the mistake of this letter still is not little really, nevertheless, this matter not only one class attended for the masses in national revenue respect, still attended one class to everybody again on the angle of Chinese, so right this, are you how look?
