One baldachin does not become Rome, good thing often needs fine carve of carve of essence of life, mr Jin Yong old has experience greatly to this certainly, because gold needs " flying snow reaching the sky shoots Bai Lu, a person adept in martial arts and given to chivalrous conduct of god laugh a book leans on green jade " these 14 work are not get sth done without any letup, a lot of flaw also has appeared in the process that invents in the story, such as " age of Guo Jing, yellow Chengdu " and so on is returned via having the set of deliberate quite much, then the story of golden commonplace the wording and purpose of what one writes is divided again for serialize edition, triplex edition and repair newly edition 3 version, although the masterstroke outline in departmental work did not change, but among them a few detail were to alter however many, normally the circumstance comes down to look, altering is to make story clue more reasonable, the wording and purpose of what one writes has Dan Jinyong twice however opposite relatively of failure alter, caused two paragraphs of big stories that do not accord with constant manage to happen.
(Jin Yong)
That " day dragon 8 " of the summit summit that is Mr Jin Yong old undoubtedly make, the story structure that multi-line of 3 leading role develops is very old, and set of its story setting is besides " more female sword " besides the earliest Northen Song Dynasty year, so this times is regarded as gold to need the fierce of the wording and purpose of what one writes learns summit summit again, side of free manner and air, beg, little forest, constellation clique, the Western Xia regime tastes hall it may be said is a large number of heroes rise, it is fascinating that fierce forest dispute loves to hate dispute, right now Jin Yong's calligraphy or drawing already was very mature, so flaw is less, whole book around move " beg must not " theme and spread out, but there still is unreasonable place in the gut of old edition, gold is then old a good deal of one brandish, changed one the individual's outcome.
(Yang Guo stage photo)
That person is Wang Yuyan, the Wang Yuyan in old edition was to leave a surname answer, follow paragraph praise went Dali, however Duan Yure was to marry Wang Yuyan to be not accorded with " beg must not " theme, be in then repair the gold in edition newly to often let Wang Yuyan regain again beside a surname answer, although be to let paragraph praise " beg must not " , but this lets Wang Yuyan however, paragraph praise, a surname answer the relation of 3 people becomes very funny, should know Duan Zhengchun can be hound somebody to death of a surname answer to Wang Yuyan gives birth to mother king madam and unripe father, the Wang Yuyan below normal logic can return this cousin readily beside, that this woman rather also too without the head, a villain in drama reaved the fiancee of leading role unexpectedly, tell the truth this gut is pulled a bit.
(Wang Yuyan, paragraph praise stage photo)
Alter inconsequently additionally one times come from " hero ejaculation vulture is passed " one book, let alter this nevertheless the add that the reason that appears unreasonable must mention it however is made " associate of divine carve a person adept in martial arts and given to chivalrous conduct " , the word says " shoot vulture " hero is Guo Jing, Yang Kang, so Where is heroine? Perhaps your truly thinking can answer Huang Rong, Mu Nianci, actually the serialize edition between one's early years " shoot vulture " in still have a woman that the name is Qin Naqin, although that person does not calculate go up leading role, but however leading role of be better than, the reason is in depended on her be delivered of Yang Guo for Yang Kang, what? You had not heard the name of this person, the reason is very simple, because of golden veteran her cutout.
(stage photo of a surname answer)
To let " shoot vulture " gut is more clear and coherent, also because " Qin Naqin destroys Wu Mu posthumous papers " the bridge paragraph do not suit to make up " lean on Tian Tulong to write down " , with it is Qin Naqin by gold old cruel-hearted cutout besides, and Na Mu reads aloud kind with respect to follow a rational line to do some work well was made up Yang Guo's mother, such altering look be like perfunctory, in " divine carve " in had disharmonious place however, it is the mother that Na Yang appears not to miss his too namely, yang Guo is wanting to revenge for Yang Kang all the time, allude rarely however oneself mother, this is why, the answer is very simple, because of Mu Nianci from most beginning ought not to be his mother, because have,perhaps alter this just about, jin Laocai is sedulous desalt the correlation between Yang Guo and his mother. Beyond question, of the summit summit that the work with old gold still is knight-errant novel bound make, alter twice this brought leak also is the defects cannot obscure the virtues.
